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A project table proves volume. It does not prove judgement. These are short excerpts from real commissions, each with a note on a decision that had to be made.

About these samples. Excerpts from work delivered between 2013 and 2015. Brand names, client names, document identifiers and every other identifying detail have been removed, and only short passages are shown rather than whole documents. Longer samples, and work in a domain closer to yours, can be sent under NDA on request.

Labour regulation EN → UR · 2015
Source, English

The working hours are determined for the works performed under the sun and in open areas provided that labor shall not be present at the working site after 12:30 PM. No business shall be resumed before 3:00 PM. The employer shall provide an appropriate shelter for such Labour to rest therein during this period.

Target, Urdu

دھوپ میں اور کھلے مقامات پر کام کرنے کے اوقات کار کا تعین کیا گیا اس شرط کے ساتھ کہ مزدور 12:30 بجے دوپہر کے بعد کام کی جگہ پر موجود نہیں رہے گا۔ 3:00 بجے دوپہر سے قبل کوئی کام دوبارہ شروع نہیں کیا جائے گا۔ اس مدت کے دوران آرام کرنے کے لئے آجر ایک مناسب آرام گاہ فراہم کرے گا۔

The decision. A decree creates obligations, so every shall in the English has to land as an obligation in Urdu rather than a prediction. The clock times stay in Western digits instead of Eastern Arabic numerals, because a site notice like this is read alongside the English version by an inspector who needs to check them against each other at a glance.

Medical device instructions EN → UR · 2013
Source, English

Human chorionic gonadotropin (hCG), a glycoprotein hormone secreted by viable placental tissue during pregnancy, is excreted in urine approximately 20 days after the last menstrual period. The levels of hCG rise rapidly reaching peak levels after 60-80 days.

Target, Urdu

ہیومن کرونِک گوناڈوٹروپن (ایچ سی جی)، حمل کے دوران زندہ جنین کے بافتوں سے نکلنے والا ایک گلائیکو پروٹین ہارمون ہے، جو گذشتہ حیض کے تقریباً 20 دنوں کے بعد پیشاب میں شامل ہوتا ہے۔ 60 تا 80 دنوں کے بعد ایچ سی جی کی سطحیں تیزی کے ساتھ بڑھتے ہوئے اعلیٰ ترین ہوجاتی ہیں۔

The decision. The hormone name is transliterated rather than translated, because a technician has to be able to match it to the English literature and to the abbreviation printed on the device. The surrounding physiology is translated properly. Inventing an Urdu word for a hormone would look more scholarly and be less useful.

Humanitarian funding announcement EN → HI · 2013
Source, English

The new humanitarian support of £30 million takes the UK’s total contribution to the Syria humanitarian crisis to £170 million. The results from this new funding are expected to include: • access for 224,000 people to care for trauma injuries, primary health care and referrals to further health facilities;

Target, Hindi

30 मिलियन पाउण्ड के इस नए मानवीय सहयोग के साथ यूके का सीरियाई संकट में मानवीय सहयोग कुल 170 मिलियन पाउण्ड तक पहुँच गया है। इस नए निधीकरण के परिणामों में निम्नांकित के शामिल होने की अपेक्षा की जा रही है: • 224,000 लोगों के लिए आघाती चोटों की देखभाल, प्राथमिक स्वास्थ्य देखभाल तथा अधिक आगे की स्वास्थ्य सुविधाओं तक संप्रेषण की सुविधा तक पहुँच;

The decision. Figures stay as figures. A press release lives or dies on whether the numbers survive intact, so 224,000 is not spelled out and the currency amounts keep their original form. The diplomatic euphemism non-lethal support is carried across as a euphemism rather than resolved into something blunter, because softening or sharpening it would both be editorial.

Public service announcement EN → HI · 2013
Source, English

The new service is available to customers applying for a 6-month to a 2-year multiple entry visit visa (excluding student visitors) who have previously travelled to the UK, USA, Australia, New Zealand, Canada or a Schengen country within the last 5 years. It is also available to visa applicants sponsored by companies who are members of our Business Express Programme.

Target, Hindi

नयी सेवा 6 महीने से 2 वर्ष के एकाधिक प्रवेश दौरा वीज़ा के लिए आवेदन करने वाले ग्राहकों (विद्यार्थी आगंतुकों को छोड़कर) के लिए उपलब्ध है जिन्होंने विगत 5 वर्षों में ब्रिटेन, अमेरिका, ऑस्ट्रेलिया, न्यूजीलैंड, कनाडा या एक शेन्जेन देश की यात्रा की है। यह हमारे बिजनेस एक्सप्रेस प्रोग्राम की सदस्य कंपनियों द्वारा प्रायोजित वीज़ा आवेदकों के लिए भी उपलब्ध है।

The decision. The names of the service and the programme are transliterated, not translated. An applicant will meet those exact words again on the government website and on the application form, and a beautifully translated name they cannot then find is worse than useless.

Two of these are into Urdu and two into Hindi. Marathi and Gujarati work is almost entirely into English, so samples in those pairs are certificates and evidentiary documents that cannot be shown even redacted. Ask and something appropriate can be arranged.

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